ext_60028 ([identity profile] sidhebat.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] vicarz 2009-01-21 01:56 am (UTC)

My completely amateur opinion is that poems should caress your ear with sounds that lock together by rhyme or rhythm. This disjointed poem stuttered along and did not seem relevant at all.
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